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Faith of the Fallen by ~raeven667:iconraeven667:





Faith of the Fallen


An angel's eyes, filled with tears
Survey a world that never
Could be hers, never could be held
In the tiny scabs of human hearts
Her drug the only sickness
That could never be cured
Although a few want to stay
Most of them were born to die
Eternities ago.
The shadow of an angels' heart
Once bright, now stained and bruised
From a thousand spears that drained
Her soul of faith in a God
That never loved, never cared
Never answered the questions that killed them
Never gave them a chance to live
And so they tread, the living dead
In eternities of sin.
The charred reflections of an angel's hand
That for pity was condemned
That for love became another false savior
Another goddess, fallen, crucified
Like the worms she tried to save
So angel, close your eyes
And dream of a million gods burning
In the blackness of their own souls
Trapped within eternity. . .

~Copyright©Raeven 1-27-01~
©2004-2010 ~raeven667
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Author's Comments

The poem my signature came from... written way back in high school, but I dug it up again and figured I might as well post it.
It is published and the copyright is real. Respect that or I'll sic the hellhounds on you.

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:iconfieryknight:
As always your writing touches me in ways that make me cry, beuatiful still...

Keep em comming.

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:iconraeven667:
=)
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But passion calls from hidden eyes
Her pupils dance in the wind, and live
The unknown path, the unsung melody,
The untapped spring of memory...

:blackrose:
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:icondustypoet:
Now.. i'm speechless.. so beautiful.

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"Jack O'Neill: I ask you, what could possibly be in my eye that could explain all this?"
:icontrinity-77:
geez woman you were great words even years ago. you're awesome !!

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:blush:
Thank you so much, hun!

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But passion calls from hidden eyes
Her pupils dance in the wind, and live
The unknown path, the unsung melody,
The untapped spring of memory...

:blackrose:
~Proud member of:
{*Apophysis }{ ~the-gimp}{~crowloft}
:iconraeven667:
=)
I thank you...and I'm honored to have knocked you speechless =D

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But passion calls from hidden eyes
Her pupils dance in the wind, and live
The unknown path, the unsung melody,
The untapped spring of memory...

:blackrose:
~Proud member of:
{*Apophysis }{ ~the-gimp}{~crowloft}
:icontrinity-77:
you're very welcome hon!! :)

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:iconvaeltaja:
My words fail to describe just how touching this is.. Wish I could someday write something like this =)

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Angel's Banished From Heaven Have No Other Choice Than To Become Devils
:iconraeven667:
:blush: Thank you...
It's so nice to get feedback like this.
Glad to be of service to your inspiration!

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But passion calls from hidden eyes
Her pupils dance in the wind, and live
The unknown path, the unsung melody,
The untapped spring of memory...

:blackrose:
~Proud member of:
{*Apophysis }{ ~the-gimp}{~crowloft}

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